How to Make a Good 'Star Trek' Film: Make it More Like 'Star Wars'

Before J.J. Abrams’ reboot came along, the Star Trek film franchise suffered from a lack of energy and a storytelling style that relied heavily on previous knowledge of the films’ characters. Out of ten installments, only two or three could be said to be “good” movies. Another three or four are downright bad. So, what was Abrams’ secret in creating a blockbuster Star Trek film that virtually anyone can enjoy? Make it more like Star Wars. It seems so obvious, really.

In the recent DVD and Blu-ray releases of Abrams’ Star Trek, writer Roberto Orci states several times that he, co-writer Alex Kurtzman, and director Abrams were able to make their film awesome by approaching it with the mindset of, “What can we learn from Star Wars, here?”1. The writer elaborates in the commentary on both of the DVD releases and the Blu-ray:

A lot of fun-poking has happened in terms of how we sort of echoed the storytelling in Star Wars, but that is sort of the great myth of our childhood, in the sort of Joseph Campbell tradition. We always talked about rebooting Trek in terms of saying, “Where’s our moment when Luke is looking at the twin suns?” [referring, specifically, to the early shot of Kirk gazing at the docked Enterprise]

Doubtless, Orci’s words will incite some angry responses from Star Trek fans, but genre politics aside, a serious (or even cursory) consideration of what he’s saying about this strategy reveals a truth as undeniable as any art-related truth can be. Let's take a look:

For his, Abrams', and co-writer Alex Kurtzman's purpose of using Star Wars as a reference point, Orci (who is apparently a die-hard Trek fan, by the way) implies that it was primarily the first Star Wars film, A New Hope, that they referred to. If you look at that film alone, you see an archetypal story of a boy with modest origins, big dreams, and an even bigger destiny. Star Wars, at its core, was not about a Rebel Alliance’s attempt to free a galaxy; it was about the maturation of young Luke Skywalker. Imagine, for instance, watching the Death Star assault with no Luke. Imagine that film's lightsaber battle with an undeveloped character Obi-Wan's place. It suddenly all becomes less important. Star Wars' characters were crucial to its story. We feel for them, we relate to them, and we therefore have a stake in what transpires.

The Star Trek films, on the other hand, lacked the driving force of something we can relate to so readily. Rather than focusing primarily on the characters themselves, these movies mostly emphasized its events -- the conflicts and adversities the characters faced. It didn’t matter so much what the characters were feeling (The Wrath of Khan is, of course, an exception here); what was important was that their obstacles were overcome. Take Star Trek: The Motion Picture, for instance, a franchise installment that is, on the Star Trek film spectrum, not one of the more obviously flawed ones. It functions purely as an intellectual exercise. The characters, for the most part, are well-acted, but they are not challenged on a personal level. The film is therefore emotionally detached from its audience, despite an interesting premise. Without any further aesthetic merits, it remains, on the whole, a mediocre film. This is just one example of that film franchise’s tendency to not develop its characters, perhaps banking on the assumption that most viewers would be fans of the television series and thus show up with a prepackaged stake in the Enterprise crew. In a final analysis, there is no reason to care about the events in the majority of Trek films unless you are already a fan of the TV show.

Another cue Abrams took from Star Wars is the style of its action sequences. Whereas the Trek films, by-and-large, follow the franchise’s infamous “submarine warfare” template, Star Wars featured dogfights modeled after actual WWII documentary footage, which, somewhat ironically, is eons more kinetic than what Trek provided. Abrams, realizing that watching stationary ships fire photon torpedoes at each other is hardly exciting, incorporated into his action sequences a level of energy unmatched even by most films that focus solely on action. In fact, his action sequences at times surpass even some of Star Wars’ lesser battles. In the previous Star Trek films, the action is merely a means to take the plot somewhere. In Abrams’ Star Trek, the action moves the plot along, but it can also be enjoyed entirely on its own merits. The result is a film devoid of boring segments that serve only to get us to the next plot point. Add to that a cast of characters whose emotions we can feel, and you’ve got an enjoyable movie.

There are character-driven moments and plots to be found in the pre-2009 Star Trek films, but they are few and far between. No matter where your Star Wars/Star Trek propensities lie, there is practically no denying that the original Star Wars is far superior to any film the Star Trek franchise gave us (which is no insult, considering that it is a rare film of any franchise -- or genre -- that can compare to the quality of Star Wars). Simply put, Abrams turned to a classic movie that was done right in every way, and he used it to revive a decades-old film franchise that had struggled ever since its second installment. For that, I say brilliant use of a past masterpiece.

What do you think? Were the methods of Orci, Kurtzman, and Abrams an affront on Star Trek, or is it simply smart writing?
1 "A New Vision." Star Trek (Single-Disc Edition DVD), Star Trek (Two-Disc Digital Copy Special Edition DVD), and Star Trek (Three-Disc Digital Copy Special Edition Blu-ray). Paramount, 2009.

Comments

ST vs SW

This is very interesting post, but I'm afraid that I have to disagree with much of it. In one sense, making Star Trek like Star Wars can lead to a more visually exciting experience. It is true that, with the exceptions of ST I, II, and XIII (First Contact), the effects in Trek films are usually adequate but not much more. Also, some of the later Next Generation films do indeed lack much character depth.

However, I have always thought that this perennial debate about ST vs SW was a bit silly. Besides an outer space setting, the two franchises have almost nothing in common. It would be much more appropriate to compare Star Wars with Lord of the Rings rather than Trek. Star Wars (especially episodes IV and V) is, as was noted, about a young man tackling enormous obstacles in order to achieve maturity and wisdom. That sentence could also be used to describe Frodo in LOTR. In the 2009 Trek, grafting this idea onto James Kirk was interesting (and entertaining), but it's really not what Star Trek, when it's done well, is about.

Good Trek films are about exploration and ideas. Its many problems aside, there are more good and thought provoking questions asked in ST I than in all six SW films. Star Trek also (again, when it's done well) an examination of what it means to be human. It also very often is about loyalty. I again have to disagree with Robert here: Good Trek films usually have great character depth (whether it's Kirk truly facing death in Trek II, Kirk sacrificing the Enterprise itself to save Spock in Trek III, Kirk coming to grips with his own prejudices in Trek VI, or Picard conquering his obsession for vengeance in Trek VII); in fact, the only worthwhile moments in Trek V (definitely the franchise's worst entry) are those brief moments where we see Bones' grief for helping his father with assisted suicide or Spock re-experiencing some childhood pain. Trek is better than most sci-fi franchises and plumbing its characters depths (at least in the TOS films; the TNG films did become fairly bland action films, XIII being the exception). When one thinks about it, the only characters explored in any real depth in Star Wars are Luke and Anakin, the rest are fun but not really more than archetypes.

With all respect, I don't believe that it's undeniable that the original Star Wars is better than any Trek film. I'd take Trek II with me to a desert island before A New Hope. Also, to me, this is like asking what is better, M*A*S*H or ER. They are both medical shows, but they are so different otherwise it's like comparing apples to oranges. Making the Trek franchise more like Star Wars, to me, will make for films that might be a bit more fun but less thought provoking.

A re-rebuttal

Hi Eric, thanks for your comments. Here is more of what I think:

I have always thought that this perennial debate about ST vs SW was a bit silly. Besides an outer space setting, the two franchises have almost nothing in common.

That's true, and that's not exactly what I was doing. My point was the the Star Trek film franchise would benefit from an infusion of some of the things that made Star Wars so great. If you're including the TV series, there definitely is no sense in debating ST vs SW.

Good Trek films are about exploration and ideas. Its many problems aside, there are more good and thought provoking questions asked in ST I than in all six SW films.

That is true, too, but films that focus too much on ideas tend to leave out emotions, which are what really allow people to connect to them. If that aspect is missing, there's no ultimate point to the intellectual questions raised.

Good Trek films usually have great character depth (whether it's Kirk truly facing death in Trek II, Kirk sacrificing the Enterprise itself to save Spock in Trek III, Kirk coming to grips with his own prejudices in Trek VI, or Picard conquering his obsession for vengeance in Trek VII); in fact, the only worthwhile moments in Trek V (definitely the franchise's worst entry) are those brief moments where we see Bones' grief for helping his father with assisted suicide or Spock re-experiencing some childhood pain. ... When one thinks about it, the only characters explored in any real depth in Star Wars are Luke and Anakin, the rest are fun but not really more than archetypes.

Perhaps, but I didn't say there are not moments like these to be found. I said they are few and far between. For ten movies, there is not much analysis of these characters. It's been a while, but if I remember correctly, Star Trek VI setup Kirk's prejudice, then set it aside for most of the movie while he got in and out of trouble, and then brought it up around the climax. Many of the SW prequels lack these moments as well, but, again, Orci (and I) was referring only to A New Hope.

the only worthwhile moments in Trek V (definitely the franchise's worst entry) are those brief moments where we see Bones' grief for helping his father with assisted suicide or Spock re-experiencing some childhood pain.

True again, and yet again, this was one good moment in an overall bad film. Shatner could have learned a lot from Star Wars when he directed this one.

With all respect, I don't believe that it's undeniable that the original Star Wars is better than any Trek film. I'd take Trek II with me to a desert island before A New Hope.

I'm sure most Trek fans would choose the same, but that doesn't mean it is outright better. I agree with what you said that the ST vs SW debate is a hopeless one, but I would refer to the most objective measure we have (which, obviously, is still a subjective one): the American Film Institute. They rank Star Wars as the thirteenth best American film of all time. Star Trek has zero films on the list -- not even The Wrath of Khan. The point is not that there aren't people who like that film better than Star Wars -- there are surely many -- the point is that Star Wars has some great characteristics that the Star Trek films, for the most part, lack.

But I'm getting perhaps a little out of line. The point is not whether the Star Wars franchise is better than the Star Trek franchise. The point is that film-wise, Star Wars had a lot to offer Star Trek. The writers realized that, and they created one of the best Star Trek films yet.

I'm enjoying this debate. Your move.

A re-re-rebuttal

Okay, raise shields and fire photon torpedoes (or fire blasters and activate hyperdrive)! I'm also enjoying this debate. I'll do as you did and address specific points.

That is true, too, but films that focus too much on ideas tend to leave out emotions, which are what really allow people to connect to them. If that aspect is missing, there's no ultimate point to the intellectual questions raised.

In many cases this is true. However 2001, possibly the finest sci-fi film ever, is almost bereft of emotion. To me, it depends on a film's goals. If your goal is to generate excitement or explore a character's depths, then it is important to connect with an audience emotionally. If, however, your goal is to explore instead grand ideas or concepts (as in 2001 or Star Trek I, a more cerebral approach is called for. Granted, in film it's usually important to have that emotional connection than it is, say, in a work of philosophy, but, to me, a film, if artfully made and executed, can lack this aspect and still be good or even great.

Perhaps, but I didn't say there are not moments like these to be found. I said they are few and far between. For ten movies, there is not much analysis of these characters. It's been a while, but if I remember correctly, Star Trek VI setup Kirk's prejudice, then set it aside for most of the movie while he got in and out of trouble, and then brought it up around the climax. Many of the SW prequels lack these moments as well, but, again, Orci (and I) was referring only to A New Hope.

In Trek VI, Kirk's anti-Klingon prejudice is a running theme throughout the film. The only problem that I had with it was that Kirk seemed almost too bigoted (there is friendly dispute between Shatner and Nick Meyer; Shatner says that Meyer cut out some moments of Kirk regretting his "Let them die!" comment). I have always thought that Trek was more character driven than SW, which is much more of a razzle-dazzle adventure.

True again, and yet again, this was one good moment in an overall bad film. Shatner could have learned a lot from Star Wars when he directed this one.

I can't argue at all here. You're exactly on the money!

For me, Trek at its best is as an exploration of humanity and (I forgot to mention this in my first post) an allegory for current issues and events. We see this in Trek IV and Trek VI explicitly, but it's also present in Trek II and III (which uses the Genesis device as an allegory of both the military use of science and irresponsible science itself). Shatner has said that the original idea behind Trek V was to have Sybok be a stand in for the charismatic Jimmy Swaggart types (even though this never really is present in the poor film that Trek V is). You've said that Trek may benefit from a little infusion of Star Wars into it. I myself thought that some of the Star Wars prequels better moments were when it took a page out of Trek's book and became an allegory of the death of democracies and the rise of fascism (some people went so far as to calling George Bush a Sith Lord http://ww4report.com/node/575). Again, making Trek more like Star Wars will probably make for more "exciting" films, but, I believe, a bit of Gene Roddenberry will have to go in favor of a bit of George Lucas.

Over to you....

One last swing

Okay, here we go. Last swing for me.

However 2001, possibly the finest sci-fi film ever, is almost bereft of emotion. To me, it depends on a film's goals. If your goal is to generate excitement or explore a character's depths, then it is important to connect with an audience emotionally. If, however, your goal is to explore instead grand ideas or concepts (as in 2001 or Star Trek I, a more cerebral approach is called for.

You're almost right, here, but not quite. Note my original post: "The film is therefore emotionally detached from its audience, despite an interesting premise. Without any further aesthetic merits, it remains, on the whole, a mediocre film."

So, no, 2001 does not have emotion, per se. But it contains a wealth of artistic merits -- beyond its intellectual merits. These aesthetics are its amazing use of music and visuals, which, when you consider their effect, are actually the film's carriers of feeling (instead of using emotion to bring that feeling); they provide it with a sense of awe, wonder, and beauty beyond the intellectual aspects of the content matter.

You've said that Trek may benefit from a little infusion of Star Wars into it. I myself thought that some of the Star Wars prequels better moments were when it took a page out of Trek's book and became an allegory of the death of democracies and the rise of fascism (some people went so far as to calling George Bush a Sith Lord

Two things: First of all, the SW prequels were not really allegories about the death of democracy -- they were straight-up literally about the death of democracy. Second, though, and more importantly, the prequels were vastly inferior to episodes IV-VI, which doesn't say anything good for the ideas-over-adventure approach. Even if you and I personally disagree on their quality, the fact is that the vast majority of people were unable to connect with the prequels. This is evidence of their relative neglect of feeling in favor of plot. Again, this is why I emphasized that it was good that Orci and Kurtzman took cues specifically from A New Hope (though the rest of the original trilogy would seem to help them, also).

Again, though, thanks for your thoughts Eric. Hopefully we can do this again on a future blog post. Feel free to take the last word.

Closing thoughts....

Okay, sorry it took so long.... Once again, point by point:

You're almost right, here, but not quite. Note my original post: "The film is therefore emotionally detached from its audience, despite an interesting premise. Without any further aesthetic merits, it remains, on the whole, a mediocre film."

So, no, 2001 does not have emotion, per se. But it contains a wealth of artistic merits -- beyond its intellectual merits. These aesthetics are its amazing use of music and visuals, which, when you consider their effect, are actually the film's carriers of feeling (instead of using emotion to bring that feeling); they provide it with a sense of awe, wonder, and beauty beyond the intellectual aspects of the content matter.

You're correct here about 2001, but STTMP also has outstanding music and still impressive now (dazzling at the time) visuals. As I've noted above, and in my original review, it also poses some almost profound questions about the nature of humanity. That film's problems mostly have to do with extremely slow pacing and a story that is almost stolen from a few Original Series plots, not in it's attempts to say something interesting or any lack of amazing effects or outstanding music.

Two things: First of all, the SW prequels were not really allegories about the death of democracy -- they were straight-up literally about the death of democracy. Second, though, and more importantly, the prequels were vastly inferior to episodes IV-VI, which doesn't say anything good for the ideas-over-adventure approach. Even if you and I personally disagree on their quality, the fact is that the vast majority of people were unable to connect with the prequels. This is evidence of their relative neglect of feeling in favor of plot. Again, this is why I emphasized that it was good that Orci and Kurtzman took cues specifically from A New Hope (though the rest of the original trilogy would seem to help them, also).

I admit that here your point is pretty solid. However, having just watched some of the bonus material on the new Trek DVD, I'm still left wondering why Abrams and Co. felt it was necessary to borrow from Star Wars per se. As I noted, except for their outer space settings, they have almost nothing in common. For my money, they could have asked what can Trek learn from The Godfather; they have just about as much in common. It is, of course, fine to borrow from any cinematic or literary source (excluding plagiarism :-)), but I always wonder why people want to compare these two franchises. Trek is much more like Babylon 5 than SW, but, with some exceptions in the '90s, hardly anyone ever asks what can Trek learn from B5.

I know I'm a little late to

I know I'm a little late to be adding to this discussion, but I've been exploring and enjoying this blog lately and want to throw my two cents in.

As a child, my father was a TNG fan. I remember being fascinated by some episodes and concepts in the show even then (as well as absolutely terrified more than once, I was about six at the time). But at the same time, much of the show bored me.

Several years later, my brothers and I stumbled upon Star Wars. We loved it. Here was a science fiction story with action, adventure, and characters we could relate to. It had the timeless struggle between good and evil, it had betrayals and romance and an energy that captivated us. We later saw the prequel trilogy and were not particularly impressed. But, we remain fans of the original trilogy.

For several years the idea that I should take another look at Star Trek has floated around in the back of my mind. But, for one reason or another, I didn't make the time for it. Then I saw J.J. Abrams' film. I loved it and have since seen the entirety of the Original Series as well as its movies, and the first few seasons of TNG. I have so far found TOS to be superior in many respects to both the movies and TNG, although they both have some things they do better.

I feel that Star Trek's biggest strength is that it's so all-encompassing. You have science, philosophy, action, politics, humor, human drama, and unique and compelling characters. It has two major weaknesses that I have seen: since it is so all-encompassing, it often has issues with finding the proper balance to be both entertaining and thought provoking; and it is not very accessible. It takes a major investment of time to get to know the characters. Once you know the characters, the highly nuanced performances of the actors make the human drama very compelling, but before that point, the series can seem very cerebral.

The point of J.J. Abrams' movie was to make Star Trek accessible and entertaining. He did this by focusing on several aspects that have not been given as much weight in the other TOS movies: characterization, human drama, action, and humor. Star Wars did focus on these elements, and incorporated them successfully into a very compelling science fiction world.

Science, philosophy, and politics take a back seat in J.J.'s film. I find this perfectly acceptable myself. This movie is an origin story and a gateway into the Star Trek universe. He and the writers have said that incorporating these elements into the next film is a priority, and recognize that they are vital to Star Trek.

So, why did they specifically draw from Star Wars? A New Hope is an extremely popular and successful origin story as well as one of the most generally beloved science fiction movies of all time. The fact that it was a movie is important. Pacing is very different in a TV show. You have much more time to explore characters, issues, and storylines. A New Hope also makes entry into the Star Wars universe very easy. You are immediately drawn into the story and by the end, you know and care about the characters and their major goals and obstacles. Before J.J.'s movie, I don't think there was one episode or movie that could do that. The characters and universe of Star Trek are robust enough that drawing elements from Star Wars doesn't take anything away from them, and instead adds something that was lacking.

Very good points

Wow, I think you make some really good points here. I, too, have found that ST takes a big investment of time in order to come to feel for its characters. That's why most of the films are so hard to appreciate.

As you say, the series is mostly focused on ideas. At times that makes it great. Other times, that is a source of its imperfection.

Abrams' reboot should change that. He's given us a fun movie that can be appreciated for its pure entertainment value and, as you said, lacks the franchise's trademark philosophical pondering. Since he's established his characters so well, the next film should be able to delve into more thought-provoking territory yet still provide us with characters we care about.

Glad you're liking the blog. Hope to hear from you some more.

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